Friday, June 5, 2015

Sean's Spectacular ePortfolio

Sean has been working all year on some excellent projects. Here is a link to his ePortfolio. Have a look around and let him know which project you liked the best!

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  1. Dear Sean,

    I have not played baseball, but I think I would like swinging a bat. What is the bat and ball made of? I love to play outdoor soccer with my team. I have tried club soccer, but I did not like it. Have you tried club soccer? If you did, did you like it? I also like to have hot chocolate with marshmallows, even though I don't drink it very often. Do you like the marshmallows better, or the hot chocolate? I also love blogging. My favorite post is the Historical Figures post where we commented as if we were the person we studied for our biography. I did Helen Keller who was cool.

    I couldn't see your Geometric Diagram because it was blocked, but from you text, I saw that it was hard for you to connect the text box to the arrow and get the words on the page and not off the page. By the way you wrote, I could see what you picture of Spain would have looked like.

    I like how you made your copy of the monster slide show bigger. I explained the details of my monster very carefully, and it was successful.

    I actually put my turkey at the colossal Colosseum and on the top of the Leaning Tower of Pisa, which are famous landmarks in Italy. What country did your turkey travel to, and what landmarks did he visit?

    I also couldn't see your informational text because it was blocked, but I think anybody who looked at it could see that your writing had a lot of interesting adjectives. Coyotes are the mascots at some schools around here because there are many coyotes that live here I think. Am I correct? I did my report on sea otters. Did you know they are mammals like coyotes?

    Your name letter is red, white, and blue like the American flag. I don't really watch basketball, though I like the pink font you used in your writing. Why did you chose pink? I also had to do my name with two different circles and strips because I have four letters in my name. First I did, fourths, and then halves.

    Do you have any questions for my e-portfolio?



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