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Thursday, November 21, 2019

Family Blogging Month: Generational Comments

Our November is Family Blogging Month post has some wonderful exchanges! Some comments are student-to-student. However, some are generational! 

Below are some sample comments that involve students, their parents, and grandparents.   We love our online learning community!


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Ivy's Generations


Here is a comment to all of us from Ivy's mom on Our Emoji Math.  She ends with an algebraic answer for a student sports puzzle. 






Ivy, her mom, and her grandfather have a conversation going on here! 
Everyone loves blogging and math!

















Here is a comment to all of us from Ivy's grandmother in Chicago:




Several students commented back to Ivy's Chicago grandmother.








Ivy's dad has a wonderful conversation with Kate! 





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Evan's Generations

Here is a comment to all of us from Evan's grandmother in Kentucky. We started a comment back to her on the Family Blogging Month post so stay posted!





Evan and friends have commented back to Grandma Alice! 






 Evan's mom has a terrific comment on the Family Blogging Month post.





Emily E. and her grandmother have written a comment together on Dolphins Delight!






 How do you encourage your family members to contribute to Family Blogging Month? Leave some tips to help your classmates.

What are some relatives besides parents and grandparents? 



Friday, June 13, 2014

Super Ultimate Cursed Computer! (Summer Writing)

Summer story written by Evan
My third graders are choosing to write stories in their Google Drives! Next, they share the Google Doc with me and leave a Google Doc comment asking to be published. I love having a connected learning community!  



The Super Ultimate Cursed Computer! 
By Evan





It was the last day of school at the end of the day for Mrs. Yollis’ class and she was showing the class on twitter about Mr. JR, but suddenly the computer went crazy.


“What is going on with the computer? I must call Mr. JR.” said Mrs. Yollis. Then the Panda started to say,


“Hello class, I’m your animal Panda,” said Panda. The class began to scream!


“Ahhhhh, Panda spoke!” said the class.


“Ok everybody, we must go outside and run to the library. Run!” said Mrs. Yollis. Mrs. Yollis’ class started to run out of the room and headed to the library, but as Mrs. Yollis was about to exit the classroom, she saw twenty-eight desks floating in the air and they
were on top of each other.





Illustration by Mrs. Yollis


“Oh my, I need to get out of here. The computer has taken over the class!” said Mrs. Yollis. Mrs. Yollis slammed the door and came outside.


“Students, I saw the desks floating in the air!” shouted Mrs. Yollis. Inside of the classroom the other desks started to float in the air too.


“Class you should look behind you,” said Evan


“And why?” asked Mrs. Yollis.


“The computer has grown larger,” said Evan. Mrs. Yollis turned around and saw the massive computer.


“It’s huge, like three giants!” said Mrs. Yollis. Samantha saw three dogs named Buck, Rocky, and Tanner. They were wearing ninja suits.


“Mrs. Yollis, there is Buck, Rocky, and some other dog,” said Samantha.

“That is my mom’s old dog, Tanner,” answered Evan. The three dogs came into a group and faced the evil curse computer. Buck did a huge kick and broke the body. Then Rockey did a big paw punch to the desktops. Finally Tanner broke the screen. Mrs. Yollis’ class was saved by these three dogs.