Dear Class,
Kiwi and I had a very special day together. First, Kiwi and I decided to go by the pool to relax and drink some ice-cold water.
~Third graders learning and sharing together~
Dear Class,
Kiwi and I had a very special day together. First, Kiwi and I decided to go by the pool to relax and drink some ice-cold water.
* * *
Getting feedback is important to our writers. Let us know what you liked or what you learned.
Steps to Comment:
1. Write your comment in the box below. Be sure that you have proofread it for spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. Students should have a parent check it!
2. Choose an identity. (If you have a gmail account, use it. If not, choose name/url. You can leave the url blank if you do not have a blog.)
3. Click "Publish your Comment". You may preview your comment before publishing if you'd like.
Important: All comments MUST be approved by me.
:-) Mrs. Yollis
Dear Nor,
ReplyDeleteI think Kiwi ate dog food. Am I right?
My favorite part of the adventure was Kiwi drinking ice cold water. What was your favorite part?
Warmly,
Liv