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:-) Mrs. Yollis
Dear James,
ReplyDeleteYes! I want to eat your dioirama! I love how you used real food.
Your friend,
Emily:-D
Dear James,
ReplyDeleteI love your diorama! It is so cool that you made real candy! How did you do it? I am really curious!
Your Classmate,
Amanda:)
Dear Taylor S.,
ReplyDeleteI can't believe that you made the present! I think that you used the same tree as me, but you fancied it up. Thanks for sharing!
Your friend,
Lexi
Dear Sean,
ReplyDeleteI like how you painted a golf ball to make a boulder! Great idea!
From,
Emily :-)
To all the kids in Mrs. Yollis's class,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great job you all did on your dioramas. I was very impressed with all the hard work you put into creating them. They were very creative. I enjoyed listening to you talk about your dioramas.
Great Job!!!
Dana (Shane F's mom)
Dear Jonah,
ReplyDeleteI like how you said that the mice are "chilling out".That was funny to me! I also like the light you put at the top. You did a great job.
From,
Shane j 11 :-D
Dear Class, Wow! What a fantastic job you did. Not only did you read some very interesting books, you conveyed the highlights so well in your dioramas and descriptions. I almost feel like I read a part of each of your books with you. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteMrs. Kumar
Dear Mrs. Yollis' Class,
ReplyDeleteWe had so much fun seeing and hearing
about your diroamas!
Good job everyone!
Taylor G.'s Mom & Dad
Dear Students,
ReplyDeleteGood job! Your descriptions of the dioramas and your guided tours with the pointer were very clear and informative. I hope we can see more of your efforts filmed like this.
Best Regards,
Bethany's grandfather
-Mr. Brand
Dear Class,
ReplyDeleteI love how nobody said "um...".
Great narration - it was fun making the dioramas!
Love
Bethany:]
Dear Alasia,
ReplyDeleteI love your diorama! I love that you put wall paper that looked like the jungle! How did you do it? I'm really curious it is just so cool! I just love the lions and tigers that you put that looks like their having lunch! That is so cool! I just love it! Keep up the good art!
Your Classmate,
Amanda:)
Dear Class,
ReplyDeleteThose are the coolest dioramas I have ever seen before. You guys used such vivid words.
Your classmate,
Clementine
Dear Third Graders,
ReplyDeleteThanks for looking at the 2KM blog! We loved your blog too! You have all been doing some great work. We really liked the dioramas. Maybe we could make some in our class.
We are in Grade Two and we are seven and eight years old. We are from Geelong in Victoria, Australia.
Please keep looking at our blog and we will look at yours too!
From Miss McGeady and 2KM
Dear Lexi,
ReplyDeleteYour tree is the same as mine.
Your tree looks great in your diorama!
Great job,
Taylor S. :-)
Dear Kyle,
ReplyDeleteI love how you made those great designs on the elevator! I also love how you used game pieces as people on your diorama! You did a great job!
Your Classmate,
Taylor S. :-)
Dear Matthew,
ReplyDeleteWas the knife that the guys were holding made out of aluminum foil? Who did the boat belong to? You did a great job!
Your friend,
Taylor S. :-)
Those are all really good dioramas! I loved the one with Molly by Taylor S.!
ReplyDelete~Julia
Mrs. Yollis'
niece from
Yerba Buena :-D
Dear Julia,
ReplyDeleteThanks for saying my name in your comment!
Do you remember me from when Mrs. Yollis read?
Thanks,
Taylor S. :-D
Dear Sean,
ReplyDeleteMy grandpa does a funny head movement to impersonate King Tut. It reminds me about your book.
Best regards,
Lexi
Dear Taylor G.,
ReplyDeleteI love how you made the raindrops hang on the little piece of string! That is so cool how did you do it? I am really curious!
Best Regards,
Amanda :-)
Dear James,
ReplyDeleteYes. I do want to eat your super delicious diorama. I love all the adjectives you used in the film you made.
Your classmate,
Garrison
Dear Matthew,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your super speech because it contained a lot of verbs. I also liked the paper figures you made because they were funny.
Your Classmate,
Garrison :-D
Dear Taylor S.,
ReplyDeleteI love that you put the little flag on the christmas tree that stands for their father being in the war that was so cool! I love your "dazzling" diorama.
Best Regards,
*Amanda* :-)
Dear Marcus,
ReplyDeleteI love your diorama! You draw really really good! Your "dazzling" diorama is so cool!
I love the Henry and Mudge books!
Best Regards,
*Amanda* :-)
Dear Mrs.Yollis' class,
ReplyDeleteall of your dioramas are the greatest you guys are doing so well!
Best Regards,
Kathy (Amanda's Mom)
Dear Kyle,
ReplyDeleteI like how you made the elevators. They are very detailed. I also am interested in the way you used so many things and materials to make it.
Sincerely,
Jonah
Dear Kyle,
ReplyDeleteI love the details on your elevator and the couch that you put in.
From, Matthew
Dear Taylor,
ReplyDeleteI love how you made the radio, the presents, and the christmas tree. I also love how you made ornaments on the tree.
From, Matthew
Dear Emily,
ReplyDeleteI love your diorama! I love the picture you drew. Did you copy the cover from the book? I am really curious. The book you made your diorama is my favorite series from the tree house books.
Best Regards,
*Amanda* :-)
Dear Marcus,
ReplyDeleteI love how you made the tree house and the people. I also loved your great words in the story
From,
Shane F:)
Dear Matthew,
ReplyDeleteI like how you created things for your diorama outside the box. I could never think of that!
Your Friend,
Emily :-)
Dear Mrs. Yollis' class,
ReplyDeleteWe are the students in Mr. Salsich's class. We watched some of the dazzling dioramas. We will check out some more later. Victoria says, "the baseball one was wicked!"
Good job!
Mr. Salsich's class
Dear Sammy,
ReplyDeleteI loved how you used real lollipops on your diarama. Did your kindergarten buddy wanted to eat one did he ask if he could have one?
From,
Kyle
Dear James,
ReplyDeleteI would love to eat your diorama. I know... it is... not edible, but great job.
From,
Chloe
Dear Taylor S.,
ReplyDeleteI love how you used a tree that looked real on your diorama. Where did you get the tree?
From,
Kyle