tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post2145501978811655309..comments2024-03-16T02:40:12.452-07:00Comments on Mrs. Yollis' Classroom Blog: Halloween StoriesMrs. Yollishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08553708205781596148noreply@blogger.comBlogger57125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-49055042759051506492014-06-16T09:58:44.191-07:002014-06-16T09:58:44.191-07:00Dear Chance,
Yes, this blog has a few years under...Dear Chance,<br /><br />Yes, this blog has a few years under its belt!<br /><br />I am not sure who you will get next year in fourth grade. All of the teachers are wonderful, and I know you will excel where ever you are!<br /><br />I hope you continue to blog. It is a great way to practice writing and a fun way for us to stay in touch!<br /><br />Your proud former teacher,<br />Mrs. Y♥llisMrs. Yollishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08553708205781596148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-25299169465259322392014-06-16T09:47:45.045-07:002014-06-16T09:47:45.045-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
I can not believe I just left y...Dear Mrs. Yollis,<br /><br />I can not believe I just left you class five days a go, and this is one of your first posts. I was only three when you started this blog, and my sister was one.<br /><br />I wonder what teacher I will get next year? Hopefully, I get Mrs. Webber. <br /><br />What teacher do you think I will get next year?<br /><br />From,<br />ChanceChancenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-84081363310380655082013-05-07T19:14:18.171-07:002013-05-07T19:14:18.171-07:00Mrs. Yollis,
I just visited your blog and it has...Mrs. Yollis, <br /><br />I just visited your blog and it has come a long way! I am so proud of you and your class for receiving such great awards. Wow I can't believe its been five years! Continue doing a great job :) <br /><br />Taylor S. ( one of you first bloggers ) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-78483225194283325912011-11-14T08:02:47.117-08:002011-11-14T08:02:47.117-08:00Matthew,
I read your story, "The Candy Vampir...Matthew,<br />I read your story, "The Candy Vampire," and enjoyed it quite a lot! Who knew that scarecrows had talents other than...scaring crows! I also thought the moral of your story was well thought out and meaningful. Great job, and I hope you keep writing!<br /><br />JennaJenna Reynoldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14094328058750006332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-36182395784011372802011-11-13T21:25:37.509-08:002011-11-13T21:25:37.509-08:00Hello Mrs. Yollis! I am a current student in EDM31...Hello Mrs. Yollis! I am a current student in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama. I have to say first off that I love your class blog. I am commenting in regards to The Vampire by Marcus. Marcus had a great idea about the vampire. It is so cute that the vampire just wanted a friend. They were not bad vampires! Your class has done a great job! It was so much fun looking at your blog.Brittany Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12530737452916268862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-26786554602547843592011-11-13T21:23:54.629-08:002011-11-13T21:23:54.629-08:00James, My name is Rachel Saucier and I am a studen...James, My name is Rachel Saucier and I am a student at the University of South Alabama. I just finished reading your unfortunate Halloween story, which I found to be very entertaining. You did a great job at including details into your story which always helps keep the reader interested. I was excited to find out that Ray was able to escape the ghost before he was made into stew! I hope you had a fun Halloween. You are doing a great job with your blogging, keep up all of the good work!Rachel Sauciernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-36032991517848060382011-11-13T21:08:38.992-08:002011-11-13T21:08:38.992-08:00Hello Marcus,
I am a student in EDM 310 at the Un...Hello Marcus,<br /> I am a student in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. I really enjoyed reading your story. You did a great job. The part I enjoyed the most in your story was Juney finally had a friend. Keep up the good work.Kenesha Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10127269499008117471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-21906441491889758662011-11-13T20:32:02.883-08:002011-11-13T20:32:02.883-08:00Kyle,
I just read your great story, "The Evil...Kyle,<br />I just read your great story, "The Evil Vampire". It was great that the vampire did not turn out to be so evil after all. I hope you continue writting stories now, you are obviously extremely creative. Keep up the good work! <br />Noah,<br />University of South AlabamaNoah Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14251512112256922937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-57223448063202296042011-11-13T20:28:55.704-08:002011-11-13T20:28:55.704-08:00Hello everyone,
I'm also a student in EDM 310...Hello everyone,<br /><br />I'm also a student in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. Emily, I just read your story "The Mean Witch." I like the characters, Joe and Bob. Joe made me laugh while Bob seemed to be the sensible one. I'm glad they had the magic cheese and were able to get the wand back before the mean witch used it for something bad. Great story. Keep up the good work!Lana Brookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13914302645629386215noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-54582967158074113382011-11-13T20:25:42.516-08:002011-11-13T20:25:42.516-08:00Dear Matthew,
My name is Adrienne Babb and I am ...Dear Matthew, <br /><br />My name is Adrienne Babb and I am a student in Dr. Strange's EDM310 class at the University of South Alabama. I read your story, "The Candy Vampire" and I really enjoyed it. I appreciated your message about standing up to bullies. Draccy did the right thing by changing his bullying ways. Great job on the story and keep up the good work.<br /><br />Sincerely, <br />Adrienne BabbAdrienne Babbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13489407821446241883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-76878863109944494152011-11-13T19:34:57.890-08:002011-11-13T19:34:57.890-08:00Sean,
Hi, my name is Charlie, and I am a student a...Sean,<br />Hi, my name is Charlie, and I am a student at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama. I am in a class called EDM 310. Your story “The Hero Pumpkin” was very interesting. You are a great storyteller, and the story was full of humor and creativity. I enjoyed reading your story and it really put me in the sprit of fall. I hope you have a great week!<br />CharlieCharlie Argohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05084523371131150858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-15133501137532138322011-11-13T19:24:08.157-08:002011-11-13T19:24:08.157-08:00Hi my name is Autumn and I am also in EDM310 at th...Hi my name is Autumn and I am also in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama. I read The Unfortunate Halloween by James. I loved that Ray defeated the gooey ghost and was able to enjoy Halloween in the future. I enjoyed reading the story and look forward to following more post from Mrs. Yollis' class. Thank you for sharing.Autumn Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15387641313877865919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-915873453223462612011-11-13T19:20:51.455-08:002011-11-13T19:20:51.455-08:00Dear Shane J.,
My name is Larry McMillan. I'm ...Dear Shane J.,<br />My name is Larry McMillan. I'm a student in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. I enjoyed reading your post. Honestly I would have been going for the werewolf. For Halloween I dressed up like a werewolf. Mrs. Yollis this class blog is very entertaining to read thank you.Larry McMillanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10715025434531014256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-86771613260582544182011-11-13T18:51:47.219-08:002011-11-13T18:51:47.219-08:00Hey class, my name is David Armstrong and I am in ...Hey class, my name is David Armstrong and I am in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. First of all I want to say that I love all of your stories. The whole class blog is a lot of fun to read. Thank you all for sharing. You are a very talented group of kids. Chloe, I read your Halloween story and really enjoyed it. I would not like to be stuck in a costume at all, even if it came with the benefit of spells. I would love to fly on a broom thought! Great story. Keep up the great work class!David Armstronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13023656065799413478noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-4556153113735371272011-11-13T17:06:13.177-08:002011-11-13T17:06:13.177-08:00Hi, my name is LeeAnn and I am in EDM310 at The Un...Hi, my name is LeeAnn and I am in EDM310 at The University of South Alabama. I read "The Candy Kitty" by Taylor G.<br /> I really loved it. I found the story to be really cute. I liked the part about the kitty jumping to get candy.LeeAnn Bonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09675256279290554769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-87499095913228973072011-11-13T16:43:41.448-08:002011-11-13T16:43:41.448-08:00Dear Sean,
I am a student in EDM310 at the Univers...Dear Sean,<br />I am a student in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama. I really enjoyed reading your story. I thought you did a really great job. Frank really was a hero, because nobody likes to hear a bad joke.Patricia Radfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04229603438185688770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-42913899869241383782011-11-13T15:59:24.075-08:002011-11-13T15:59:24.075-08:00Taylor G.
My name is Jessica Sanders and I am an E...Taylor G.<br />My name is Jessica Sanders and I am an EDM310 student at the University of South Alabama. I loved your story about the candy kitty. Halloween is one of my favorite holidays, and it made me miss being able to dress up and go trick-or-treating. I also liked how the cat ended up with the last piece of candy! You are such a great writer. Keep up the great work!Jessica Sandershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13126900696991455359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-3332620741763209172011-11-13T10:18:58.674-08:002011-11-13T10:18:58.674-08:00Hey Kyle!
My name is Gretchen McPherson, a studen...Hey Kyle!<br /><br />My name is Gretchen McPherson, a student in EDM 310 at University of South Alabama. Kyle, I must say, your short story was written really well! I can tell that you write with passion and much forethought; you use descriptive words well, and I could picture the characters and their actions as I read each word! Your story reminded me a little of "How the Grinch Stole Christmas", and I love that show!<br />Did you go trick or treating this year? What did you dress up as? Did you get a bellyache from all the candy you got? It's fun to get to dress up and get free candy! Boy, do I miss Halloween as a grown-up! Keep up the good work in your writing-I will be perusing your blog again! Thanks Kyle!<br /><br />GretchenGretchen McPhersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01091077343569630635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-41023325335893697972011-11-13T07:57:30.521-08:002011-11-13T07:57:30.521-08:00Dear Shane,
Hello! My name is Kristie McNair and...Dear Shane, <br />Hello! My name is Kristie McNair and I am an EDM310 student at the University of South Alabama. I read your story Halloween Olympics, and I thought it was great! I thought it was very funny that all of those scary things decided to play those games. My favorite was the rotten pumpkin dodging. Did Ghoster get a gold medal for winning the Halloween Olympics? I have a daughter who is in the 3rd grade, and she also likes to write stories. I am going to let her read these. Good job, Shane. You are a great writer!Kristie Mcnairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283303047884025039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-2667110586112404202011-11-12T20:01:54.551-08:002011-11-12T20:01:54.551-08:00Hello Shane!!!
My name is KaShondra Rudolph. I am...Hello Shane!!!<br /><br />My name is KaShondra Rudolph. I am an EDM310 student from the University of South Alabama and I must say, I really enjoyed your story, A Fun Halloween. My favorite part of the story was the idea of putting blood on your face. Now that was an amazing idea. I also had a very fun Halloween. Even though I did not dress up, I was able to chaperoned a few kids that really enjoyed themselves. When I see kids smile, it make me so happy.<br /><br />Keep up the great writing.KaShondra Rudolphhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17531937713697407339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-85028635237219252462011-11-12T18:04:21.289-08:002011-11-12T18:04:21.289-08:00Taylor S.
My name is Angela Pitts, and I am a stu...Taylor S.<br /><br />My name is Angela Pitts, and I am a student in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. I enjoyed reading your story about Whitney and her cat. Coco sounds like a determined cat. She must really like to play with yarn. My cat, Kate, likes to play with yarn, too. I'm glad Whitney was able to find a spell to bring Coco back home, so they could go trick-or-treating. What is the next adventure for Whitney and her cat?<br /><br />Keep me posted,<br />AngelaAngela Pittshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05456387809756841841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-43219013495207285092011-11-11T12:48:41.439-08:002011-11-11T12:48:41.439-08:00Hello Sean,
My name is Christopher Reindl and I am...Hello Sean,<br />My name is Christopher Reindl and I am a student in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama. I really enjoyed reading your story "The Hero Pumpkin" about two pumpkins, and some unfunny robot scarecrows. When I read it I could see the events unfolding in front of my eyes. You truly know how to write a good story. I thank you for your work in Mrs. Yollis' Class. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.<br />Sincerely,<br />Christopher ReindlChristopher Reindlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00739192312678432868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-22618696725846729432011-11-11T11:58:00.594-08:002011-11-11T11:58:00.594-08:00Hello to Mrs. Yollis' Class.
I am a student in...Hello to Mrs. Yollis' Class.<br />I am a student in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. I love your class blog!. I just read "Crazy Halloween Day" by Behyan. It is very detailed and creative.I was impressed with the dialog in the story. The characters, Alvin and Albert, reminded me of a video that some parents created the day after Halloween this year. They told their children that they "had eaten all of the Halloween candy" and captured the reaction on video.Imagine that! I found it hilarious. Maybe you will too. Alvin and Albert, probably caused quite a bit of crying the day after Halloween. Keep up the creative writing. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for the post.Tricia Spaffordnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-26657613474416857782011-11-10T13:25:37.626-08:002011-11-10T13:25:37.626-08:00Hey Shane and fellow classmates,
Your story was v...Hey Shane and fellow classmates,<br /><br />Your story was very clever. I loved the description of the pumpkin house and all of the spooky things inside. I also love how sly Boo was when he tricked the ghost! How ironic that something as scary as a ghost would be afraid of a little fake blood. Great job! <br /><br />Sincerely, <br />Mary B. (an EDM 310 student at the University of South Alabama)Mrs. Robertshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13059117019308893705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-49270776925829479702011-11-09T12:25:05.341-08:002011-11-09T12:25:05.341-08:00Hi, my name is Sarah and I am in EDM310 at The Uni...Hi, my name is Sarah and I am in EDM310 at The University of South Alabama. I read "The Sleeping Baby" by Lexi. This story was so cute. It was very well written and had a good plot. <br /><br />My favorite part about your story was how the baby kept falling asleep. Babies tend to fall asleep when there not supposed to. I also liked how they had to put a spell on an apple and feed it to the baby to get it to stay awake.<br /><br />Keep up the good work!<br /><br />*I will be talking about this comment on <a href="http://powellsarahedm310.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">my blog</a>.Sarah Powellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04036169149871620891noreply@blogger.com