tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post5808005589943494205..comments2024-03-16T02:40:12.452-07:00Comments on Mrs. Yollis' Classroom Blog: White to Brown :: (Summer Writing)Mrs. Yollishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08553708205781596148noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-73573179133499976202014-06-20T03:16:41.443-07:002014-06-20T03:16:41.443-07:00Well done Shayna, I enjoyed reading your story bec...Well done Shayna, I enjoyed reading your story because there were some nice twists and misunderstandings in it. Shakespeare often introduced confusion through misunderstanding to build his plays up. You have developed a really nice character in Eddy and if you wanted to you could create new adventures for Eddy that your readers can enjoy.<br /><br />I hope that you have shared your work with your family they will be proud of you.<br /><br />Mr E <br />MiddlehamDavid and Adelehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09978575242392226492noreply@blogger.com