tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post4749252371594752151..comments2024-03-26T23:38:39.659-07:00Comments on Mrs. Yollis' Classroom Blog: Classy Clauses!Mrs. Yollishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08553708205781596148noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-72083228053245559602011-05-11T12:44:05.883-07:002011-05-11T12:44:05.883-07:00@ Mrs. Martinez,
Thanks for your kind words of su...@ Mrs. Martinez,<br /><br />Thanks for your kind words of support! :-)<br /><br />This is the first year I've used Twitter with my class, but I will continue to use it next year.<br /><br />We use Twitter in many ways. First, we tweet about new blog posts. We always use the hashtags #comments4kids #elemchat and #edchat. Another way we use Twitter is when we are showcasing quality sentences. Any student who creates a *masterpiece* sentence...gets to type it in our Twitter account and tweet it out!<br /><br />You can follow our class:<br /><br />@mrsyollis<br /><br />No negatives...so far!<br /><br /><br />Happy Blogging!<br /><br />Mrs. Y♥llisMrs. Yollishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08553708205781596148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-57301367104420126272011-05-11T11:20:24.398-07:002011-05-11T11:20:24.398-07:00Mrs. Yollis and Class,
I love coming to your b...Mrs. Yollis and Class,<br /><br /> I love coming to your blog and seeing the fabulous things you have learned so far. I also like to see the different ways you bring in technology. Do you think using twitter has been a good learning tool? What have you liked about it and what have you not liked about it? Do you all use a certain twitter site? <br /><br />Happy Blogging,<br /><br />Mrs. MartinezMrs. Martinezhttp://martinezroom201.edublogs.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-30187757827248051212011-04-28T22:01:11.188-07:002011-04-28T22:01:11.188-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
I have three sentences for th...Dear Mrs. Yollis,<br /><br /> <br />I have three sentences for the Classy Clause post:<br /> <br /><br />Calamity: On March 11, 2011, Japan had a very big calamity in form of a tsunami.<br /><br /> <br /><br />Cross: When I got home, I was crossed to find out that my enormous Lego set that I had spent hours making was broken.<br /><br /><br />Echoed: As we were picking a place to eat, Ethan echoed me “how about Sushi?”<br /><br />From your intelligent student,<br />Amitai<br /><br />P. S. While you were reading my comment, could you guess what grade level the first classy clause was?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-56214562007424838082011-04-28T20:42:31.328-07:002011-04-28T20:42:31.328-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
Here are my two classy clauses:...Dear Mrs. Yollis,<br /><br />Here are my two classy clauses:<br /><br />After school, my mother showed me on the computer the <b>calamaty</b> that happened in Alabama when the tornado hit the town.<br /><br />After walking two miles to the ice cream store, I was <b>cross</b> when I found out it was closed. <br /><br />Here is my extra sentence:<br /><br />While hiking late in the mountains, my father <b>echoed</b> my concerns of being eaten by coyotes. <br /><br />From,<br />MiriamVictoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14048396955875190642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-55075506813899941952011-04-28T20:30:54.845-07:002011-04-28T20:30:54.845-07:00Dear Mrs Yollis,
Here are 2 classy clauses:
Whil...Dear Mrs Yollis,<br /><br />Here are 2 classy clauses:<br /><br />While playing a game of tennis, I was <b>cross</b> at my sister for missing the ball so we lost the point. <br /><br />While watching television, I saw the <b>calamaty</b> in Alabama when the tornado landed. <br /><br />From,<br />Sarah (Miriam's sister)Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14048396955875190642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-51585383814691770672011-04-28T18:55:59.281-07:002011-04-28T18:55:59.281-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
Here is my clause:
When I went...Dear Mrs. Yollis,<br /><br />Here is my clause:<br /><br />When I went on your blog, I was <b>stunned</b> by how many posts you have! <b> Outstanding</b> job on the blogging everyone!<br /><br />I am looking forward to seeing who wins the family blogging month for both Mrs. Yollis' and Mrs. Ranney's classes.<br /><br />Please come on to our blog and comment soon.<br /><br />All the best,<br />Aidan [in Mrs. Ranney's class]Aidanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13469101479257860338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-79784618783382587362011-04-28T16:19:24.556-07:002011-04-28T16:19:24.556-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
Here are my classy clause sente...Dear Mrs. Yollis,<br /><br />Here are my classy clause sentences using calamity and cross:<br /><br />During the school day, Mrs. Yollis' class periodically turned on the T.V. to watch the <b>calamity</b> that had taken place in Japan. <br /><br />After Jill and I had a conversation about our disagreement, I was surprised to hear the she was still <b>cross</b> with me.<br /> <br />Here is the extra credit sentence using echoed:<br /><br />While we were talking about the weather, my mom <b>echoed</b> my sentiments when I said that California usually has beautiful weather. <br /><br />Your student,<br />HannahHannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07736556257299258342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-35774037293792262392011-04-28T15:06:51.399-07:002011-04-28T15:06:51.399-07:00Dear Mrs Yollis,
Wonderful post and how correct w...Dear Mrs Yollis,<br /><br />Wonderful post and how correct with Mrs Watanabe commment. It is so true clauses sure do add another direction to a sentence.<br /><br />Will have to make it a point of using clauses in my writing.<br /><br />From pal,<br />AA.AAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15121359512001549545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-64678759211273903692011-04-28T09:38:52.782-07:002011-04-28T09:38:52.782-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
Here are my two classy clauses ...Dear Mrs. Yollis,<br /><br />Here are my two classy clauses with stunned and nuisance. <br /><br /><b>While I was at the park,</b>I was <b>stunned</b> when I saw a dog and fox fighting and two wolves hunting.<br /><br /><br /><b>After the rabbits eat the grass,</b> they eat the flowers which makes them a <b>nuisance</b><br /><br />From,<br />TuckerMrs. Yollishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08553708205781596148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-49278791512023083832011-04-27T21:09:06.209-07:002011-04-27T21:09:06.209-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
I have been enjoying writing th...Dear Mrs. Yollis,<br /><br />I have been enjoying writing the two sentences and tweeting them.<br /><br />My two sentences are: <br /><br />During my birthday, I was <b>stunned</b> to get a real camera. <br /><br />Before school started, my next door neighbor's dog started barking and that was a <b>nuisance</b>.<br /><br />From,<br />MiriamMiriamnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-17747284241702359722011-04-27T18:33:30.861-07:002011-04-27T18:33:30.861-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
Here are my two classy clause...Dear Mrs. Yollis, <br /><br />Here are my two classy clauses with stunned and nuisance. The first sentence is with stunned in it.<br />I went for a walk in the park, and I was <b>stunned</b> when I saw a dog and fox were fighting,<b> while</b> two wolves were hunting.<br />Here is the second sentence with nuisance in it.<br />Rabbits are a <b>nuisance</b> because they eat grass <b>after</b> they eat the flowers.<br /><br />From,<br />TuckerTuckernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-59297600185661480492011-04-27T17:21:08.418-07:002011-04-27T17:21:08.418-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
Here is my classy clause:
Befor...Dear Mrs. Yollis,<br /><br />Here is my classy clause:<br />Before I got out of my room, my brother pulled me outside and I was stunned that our jungle gym was fixed.<br /><br />Sorry, my dad needs to use the computer. Classy clauses are so much fun I could go all day!<br /><br />Warmly,<br />IleannaIleannanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-50706280848984622772011-04-27T17:09:03.019-07:002011-04-27T17:09:03.019-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
Here are my two sentences using...Dear Mrs. Yollis,<br /><br />Here are my two sentences using stunned and nuisance.<br /><br />1. While I was resting at home, I was stunned to learn that students spray painted the high school walls.<br /><br />2. During my visit to the Santa Monica Pier, bees kept circling around me, creating a nuisance.<br /><br /><br />Your Student,<br />Alexa:)Alexa :-)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-20530491091599328212011-04-27T16:54:02.655-07:002011-04-27T16:54:02.655-07:00Mrs. Yollis,
Second Classy Clause:
During my readi...Mrs. Yollis,<br />Second Classy Clause:<br />During my reading time, I found my brother to be a loud nuisance while he was playing with his toys.<br />From,<br />BenBenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12674330153930287172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-38412019980615402162011-04-27T16:49:50.641-07:002011-04-27T16:49:50.641-07:00Mrs. Yollis,
My first classy clause:
When I opened...Mrs. Yollis,<br />My first classy clause:<br />When I opened my present on Christmas Day, I was stunned to find the toy I had wanted all my life.<br />From BenBenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12674330153930287172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-1578822701566528082011-04-27T15:27:20.770-07:002011-04-27T15:27:20.770-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
Here are my two sentences;
St...Dear Mrs. Yollis, <br /><br />Here are my two sentences;<br /><br />Stunned; After school, my mother <b>stunned</b> me by saying "A special person is invited to dinner at our house on Friday night".<br /><br /><br />Nuisance; It is while I was doing homework, the vertical blinds were a <b>nuisance</b> to me because of their fluttering noise!<br /><br />Have a good evening!<br /><br />Your <b>intelligent</b> student,<br /><br />AmitaiAmitainoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-23754370199333944132011-04-27T15:15:27.175-07:002011-04-27T15:15:27.175-07:00Dear Mrs. Yollis,
I enjoyed reading all the class...Dear Mrs. Yollis,<br /><br />I enjoyed reading all the classy clauses, and I am glad that my sentence got featured!<br /><br />The following are my two sentences using stunned and nuisance:<br /><br />While talking to me on the phone, my friend said she was <b>stunned</b> to find out that she got a bad score on her test. <br /><br />After Ramona spent some time with Willa Jean, she started to think that Willa Jean was a <b>nuisance</b>. <br /><br />Your student,<br />HannahHannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07736556257299258342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2633466533683944100.post-64395149675522354092011-04-27T14:49:43.651-07:002011-04-27T14:49:43.651-07:00Hi Mrs. Yollis' class,
When I was reading you...Hi Mrs. Yollis' class,<br /><br />When I was reading your post, I thought about what fabulous writing lessons you are learning. Clauses do spice up sentence structure and add variety. What was the most difficult part to learn about clauses?<br /><br />Kind regards,<br />Mrs. WatanabeTracy Watanabehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06720820771623655582noreply@blogger.com